sazandra: (a dark angel ~ Sazandra)
22 weeks until Chevron 8.0

No the tags for this post aren't a figment of your/mine/anybody else's imagination, I'm revisiting AYAMII (again).  

The other week I was re-reading part of AYAM (revisited) on my kindle then moved onto looking at AYAMII, what can I say but there are bits of  AYAMII  that need fixing in light of AYAM (revisited).  I've taken a copy of the February 2007 edit of  AYAMII and removed a few sentences that now make me wince, yes I was obviously happy with them at the time (either the October 2003 or 2007) but things move on.  I have now sorted most of the where Daniel should be turning into Dan thing, the lack of which really jumped out at me when I re-read the fic, and am now working on some 'thin' bits that I feel really need some attention. Oh yeah and trying to untangle the POV in a couple of bits where even I'm not sure if it's supposed to be more Daniel or Jack's POV.

I have also had another look at what I've scribbled down of my (Daniel/Mitchell) season nine SG-1 plot bunny (tentatively known as 'Totally Off The Grid' aka AYAMVI), it needs typing up and taming!  I've also gained a new (late season five SG-1) plot bunny (that isn't related to anything I've put online previously).  What to do first?  Commit new plot bunny to paper and possibly go with that or tame what I've got of AYAMVI so far?  Whatever I go with it will give me something to mull over on my many bus journeys to and from work in the new year.

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Saturday, 29 October 2011 19:00
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I had a moment of not doing things in sequence, for some reason this morning I had this idea of re-reading AYAMII, AYAMIII and AYAMIV since I hadn't read them for a while.

I read them then as something of an after thought I re-read AYAM. AYAM feels so different to me from II, III and IV - it lacks kind of the depth and detail which came to the later fics, me learning to write such stuff and not being sure about some things.

It is almost 9 years since I posted that original AYAM (looks like I released it to the world on 9th November 2002) and I just wanted to reach for a pen and start re-working bits and filling in gaps (or gapping hole in part of it) - is this the writer's version of the director's cut done years later like was done with Children of the Gods?

Other than fixing the occasional typo I haven't tweaked it since it was first posted (unlike AYAMII which got tweaked before AYAMIII was posted). Maybe I should do a printout which I can take the pen to, see how it would feel, see what I can do with it?

Has anybody else gone back to one of their earlier fics and revamped it?

Fanfic feedback

Saturday, 7 April 2007 09:51
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Please feel free to give me feedback to any of my Stargate fanfics by replying to this post.

Many thanks

Sandra

AYAMII

Sunday, 11 February 2007 19:00
sazandra: (a dark angel ~ Sazandra)
I don't make a habit of editing my fics once I've posted them but I've just done a weeny tweak to the version of AYAMII on my website so there is continuity between AYAMII and AYAMIII - a case of one little line written however long ago does not work with what I'm writing now.

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