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I played join the pieces of AYAMV this morning, yes it was joined up before I revisited AYAM but, as I've said before, there was something not quite right when I came back to AYAMV. So there was this point, just over 80 pages in (80 pages in the layout I use for work in progress, not 80 pages as I'd print them to read) where a Daniel, Jack and Paul scene just didn't work or flow. I took it apart and have had several goes at piecing it back together with new bits, this morning things clicked - though I'm still umming and ahhing about one little idea that's in there, it may stay, it may come out again. There is just something about having pen and paper in front of me, unlike when I'm trying to write while typing when I often get distracted by going online etc.