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The other day I said I'd managed to get Daniel and Jack out of the shower, what I forgot to mention was there was a gap in the scene.
So today I've been trying to plug that gap. Not sure if I've succeed yet ... probably not knowing me. One of the new paragraphs is now at the beginning of that scene as it's a more logical point than the end. Since when did my fics have logic?
Note to self: Watching SG eps and TV does not actually help the writing process!
So today I've been trying to plug that gap. Not sure if I've succeed yet ... probably not knowing me. One of the new paragraphs is now at the beginning of that scene as it's a more logical point than the end. Since when did my fics have logic?
Note to self: Watching SG eps and TV does not actually help the writing process!