continuation of: The plot bunny that may or may not produce a fic for Babsie's zine

[sazandra]

Sanna had a read. Pointed out some of the things Dawn and I discussed a few days ago and that the grammar was all over the place, I knew the latter wasn't good but was leaving it for a while until I tried to sort it out.

Anyway I've now attacked the grammar and the word count is up to 759.

I'll have another look at it tomorrow.