I know the version of AYAM II on Area 52 is inconsistent with AYAM III, by the time I wrote III I'd changed my mind about a few paragraphs of II and the version of II on my website is the revised version. I'd forgotten that Area 52 has the original version when I put the link to III on and didn't put a note/warning, whoops.
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