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Friday, 28 December 2012 10:5622 weeks until Chevron 8.0
No the tags for this post aren't a figment of your/mine/anybody else's imagination, I'm revisiting AYAMII (again).
The other week I was re-reading part of AYAM (revisited) on my kindle then moved onto looking at AYAMII, what can I say but there are bits of AYAMII that need fixing in light of AYAM (revisited). I've taken a copy of the February 2007 edit of AYAMII and removed a few sentences that now make me wince, yes I was obviously happy with them at the time (either the October 2003 or 2007) but things move on. I have now sorted most of the where Daniel should be turning into Dan thing, the lack of which really jumped out at me when I re-read the fic, and am now working on some 'thin' bits that I feel really need some attention. Oh yeah and trying to untangle the POV in a couple of bits where even I'm not sure if it's supposed to be more Daniel or Jack's POV.
I have also had another look at what I've scribbled down of my (Daniel/Mitchell) season nine SG-1 plot bunny (tentatively known as 'Totally Off The Grid' aka AYAMVI), it needs typing up and taming! I've also gained a new (late season five SG-1) plot bunny (that isn't related to anything I've put online previously). What to do first? Commit new plot bunny to paper and possibly go with that or tame what I've got of AYAMVI so far? Whatever I go with it will give me something to mull over on my many bus journeys to and from work in the new year.
No the tags for this post aren't a figment of your/mine/anybody else's imagination, I'm revisiting AYAMII (again).
The other week I was re-reading part of AYAM (revisited) on my kindle then moved onto looking at AYAMII, what can I say but there are bits of AYAMII that need fixing in light of AYAM (revisited). I've taken a copy of the February 2007 edit of AYAMII and removed a few sentences that now make me wince, yes I was obviously happy with them at the time (either the October 2003 or 2007) but things move on. I have now sorted most of the where Daniel should be turning into Dan thing, the lack of which really jumped out at me when I re-read the fic, and am now working on some 'thin' bits that I feel really need some attention. Oh yeah and trying to untangle the POV in a couple of bits where even I'm not sure if it's supposed to be more Daniel or Jack's POV.
I have also had another look at what I've scribbled down of my (Daniel/Mitchell) season nine SG-1 plot bunny (tentatively known as 'Totally Off The Grid' aka AYAMVI), it needs typing up and taming! I've also gained a new (late season five SG-1) plot bunny (that isn't related to anything I've put online previously). What to do first? Commit new plot bunny to paper and possibly go with that or tame what I've got of AYAMVI so far? Whatever I go with it will give me something to mull over on my many bus journeys to and from work in the new year.
